When You're Away

The following poem by Eve Merriam serves as a model:

When you're away
I'm a single shoe

pockets without a coat

a hat

and no head to up it on.


Among the student poems this model generated are:

When You're Away by Bruce Hall

When you're away

I'm a faceless clock

a marching band without a beat

a violin

with no strings
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When You're Away by Simone T.Reyes

When you're away

I'm an ocean without waves

a night without a moon

a prayer

without a God